Really good!
- Wasn't too sure about the piano in the intro (the actual piano synth, not the notes) you may want to search for something better (IMO Nexus has some pianos that would sound great)
- I didn't like the samples you used for the hats or the clap, the kick was nice though. The hi hat (closed) seemed kinda loud too.
- At 2:11, the song kinda lost me. There's a lot of high frequencies and mid frequencies, my speakers started making bad noises :( I'm just not a fan of that square synth you're using, doesn't really fit the song IMO
- 3:25ish = :D
Really chill and cool sounding breakdown, I like it a lot
- AHHHHH, that synth is back! :(
- No offense, but by now, the song is getting a bit repetitive, perhaps add a counter melody? (Around 4:30ish)
- Okay, 5:15ish....piano is WAY too loud.
All right, summary time:
Intro = great :D
Open hat = too loud
Clap = yuck IMO
piano vst = yuck IMO (try getting nexus, or a good soundfont)
piano = too loud
square synth = yuck IMO
Bass volume = Needs to be a bit louder
Whole song = a bit too repetitive
Hope that helped :D
~Argyros