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Kinda too simple

But nice work with it, the panning sounds cool ;)
Try to make your next one a bit more full and perhaps a tad longer.

The two synths....

Don't really work well with each other. There's a lot of clashing between them, like every time the bassline changes.

Nice little chill song though. I'd reccommend changing the main melody synth and getting a deeper bass.

Keep it up!

AcidSoldier responds:

Thanks, I'll take a look at how I can improve it.

Ehhh, not my thing

Doesn't sound like you put too much effort into it.

The kick is a basic FL stock sample, you should change that because it's really recognizable. People will always think you sound less serious about your work when you use it.

I don't know what to say about the melodies, I think they're just sytrus presets or something, but I don't know for sure so I'm not pointing any fingers.

And add a bassline :P

Keep practicing!

Sex in music form!

Really really good stuff here, nice work :)
The bassline was epic, and the drums were too, but like they guy below me said, the bass is much more powerful than the drums (specifically the kick), which can't be good.

I think you could go for one or two variations on the bassline.

YES, I FOUND THE EASTER EGG! (I hope you meant to put that in there, otherwise I seem like a prick :P You threw in the bassline from Chaoz Impact right at the end :) That was pretty epic, i must say ;) )

Keep it up!

Sytze responds:

Shhh don't tell anyone...

I liked it a lot

The voice was a bit hard to hear, but IMO it sounded pretty good. I think with a bit of work (either cheat with melodyne, or take a few vocal classes :P) you could have a pretty great voice for this kind of music.

I liked the guitar too, simple, but works great in the song.

The intro was neat, but I wished that it was incorporated more into the actual song. (The water sfx I mean)

Little kid's laugh was creepy :P

Good stuff, keep it up!

tijnn responds:

Ha thanks, i actually don't really like my music so i'll continue to let others do the vocals for me in the future but... thanks anyways, i might try something with my voice sometime. (: At least i'm glad you liked it ; )

And yeah, i really liked the simple melody too... It's so relaxing and subtle.

Anyways - Thanks for the kind review man ; )

Has soooo much potential!

If you cleaned it up a little better, as in EQ'ing and shit, it'd be really really good. The kick is a bit hard to hear, and the bass kinda drowns out everything (I know it's sorta supposed to, but it does it a bit too much).

The samples and instruments you picked are really good!

Keep it up!

It was all right :/

Like the person below me said, the instruments sucked. Pick some better ones (Just experiment with presets and stuff....or make your own ;) ) and add some nice fx to them to make them even more original.

The melodies weren't bad, kinda repetitive though.

That bell thing around 45 seconds in is really irritating.

The kick/hat loop sounds really good :) best part of the song.

+1 bonus marks because it doesn't actually have anything to do with Simple Plan (the "band") :D

Koolboy00 responds:

I think you are right..its kind of..umm...boring and by the way i just called it simple plan (just a name. not a band)
anyway thank you for your review

Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Keep it up!

LOL@10 even though i hated it ;)

DigitalPulse responds:

I LOVE YOU 2 BLAH

Thanks for the review,

Digital Pulse

Amazing! :)

I loved Chaoz Fantasy, so it's no surprise that I loved this one, great work! I might have to remix this one as well :D I think it'd be a lot harder though.

I've had it on loop for about twenty minutes now, and it's still going ;)

~Morgan

P.s. Check your email ;)

Awesome! :)

Definitely like this a lot more than the last few songs you've come out with; seems to be more like your "old" style. (which is good)

[crazed fanboy rant]

If you aren't going to finish it, is there any chance you'd want to do a collab of it with me? It's pretty intense. I have Sylenth1 as well. I've always wanted to do a collab with you

[/crazed fanboy rant]

*Prepares to have that request ignored*

Anyways, great stuff. Sounds really close to Rob Mayth, Teenagerz, and all those other Hands up! artists out there. :)
Keep it up!

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